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Woo, another page! I started it right after I finished the last one, but it still took me over a month. Probably because I got distracted by Fullmetal- I mean, spending time with family. While I was drawing this page and comparing it with the first one (okay, the second one, for some reason I hate it more than the first) and I think I really have improved! In some areas anyway. *Glares at hands* I am going to try to add backgrounds and shadows now. I am not very good at it now, but hey, I might as well practice. I tried a cool scribble effect in the last panel, only it didn't look cool after all. Oh well.

What is going on in the last panel you ask? All I can say is SOON! Muahaha!
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Like in a few pages soon.

To the , I would like help on anatomy, perspective and shading. Especially panel 2. I was trying to do a three quarters angle (if that makes sense) and I am trying it again on my next page, so some help on that would be great. Also, clothes. I don't know how to add wrinkles or control thickness.